REVISIONS MADE ON PHONE CALL: 1. thesis topics have changed to Causes

REVISIONS MADE ON PHONE CALL:
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1. thesis topics have changed to Causes of oppression, Negative effects, and possible solutions.
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2. I only added the context of the uyghurs, please add sources and information about the tibetan context/treatment of tibetans.
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3. For the background information paragraph, include historical context and why former chinese imperialism influences modern oppression; include a few definitions for strong words such as imperialism and oppression.
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4. My teacher and I have agreed to use the topic paragraph in the rough draft and split it amongst the three topics, as I have accidentally merged them into one paragraph initially. Please reflect this change.
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5. Please follow the rules on works cited page.
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I have included the instructions for the assignment, as well as the first three sources I have used and the rough draft my teacher revised. Please adhere to the instructions, use online sources for research (after my initial 3, you would need to find 7 more), and review the corrections to my rough draft. Thank you!