Part 1 – Overview The draft as a whole already has the key components included a

Part 1 – Overview
The draft as a whole already has the key components included as per the assignment; more research support may be needed to provide a comprehensive CSR Plan.
Part 2 – Main Idea/Thesis
Though the introduction includes a claim “to ensure that a good corporate social responsibility (CSR) plan exists apart from sustainable development,” it’s quite general in nature, but if you want to present a strong thesis in your report, try to also show what this plan consists of. A comprehensive thesis stating what the CSR plan contains provides a good overview of the discussion.
Part 3 – Introduction and Conclusion
Some background information about the company’s current concerns with suppliers/vendors that don’t practice ethical behaviors are missing in the introduction, but for a strong reference point and to help your reader understand why the report exists in the first place, perhaps you can consider adding such details.
Part 4 – Development
I notice an inconsistency, where not all sections/sub-sections include research support; thus, some claims are not valid or believable yet. Make sure to incorporate relevant research information throughout the discussion.
Part 5 – Organization
Considering that the draft is to use APA, the headings do not look to comply with this format. Consider checking APA guidelines to learn how to format headings in different levels, and see how your headings can follow suit.
Part 6 – Style
I notice a mix of the first person (our, we) and the third person point of view (TFord, this plan) when discussing what TFord can do to improve CSR, but as much as possible, try to use and maintain just one point of view for a cohesive presentation of the report.