I completed this assignment. Please see attachment 11.11.24. please add on and i

I completed this assignment. Please see attachment 11.11.24. please add on and incorporate references TO SLA THEORIEs
Here is the feedback from professor
Your observation provides a comprehensive descriiption of the language
learning environment in the Central Registration office, including
specific examples of interactions and language exchanges. Your direct
involvement in the language learning process, both as a facilitator
and as an observer, adds depth to the observation. I especially
appreciate that you consider various aspects of language learning,
including the experiences of the coworker, incoming families, and
yourself as the observer.
Recommendations:
While your observation describes practical language learning
situations, it lacks explicit connections to underlying theories of
language learning. Please incorporate explicit references to SLA
theories where applicable.
You touch on some factors affecting language learning (e.g., anxiety
of new families, bilingual support), but could delve deeper into
individual and social factors influencing language acquisition.
In preparation for observation 3, you should start to
1. Formulate a clear claim based on your observations
2. Gather more specific evidence from SLA literature to support your
observations
3. Develop stronger reasoning to connect your evidence to you claim
Hope this helps! Please don’t hesitate to let me know if you have any
questions moving forward.