Assessment Rubric Times New Roman (12-point font) Cover page Paragraphs & Smo

Assessment Rubric
Times New Roman (12-point font)
Cover page
Paragraphs & Smooth Transitions 5
Quotes/Citations 5
Correct use of signal phrases 5
Parallelism 5
Comparative Forms 5
At least 3 references
Length: 3-4 pages
Accurate grammar, spelling, & punctuation
TOTAL: 50 POINTS
I already did it but the professor does not like it and send back to me so I want you to edit it I will put his comment here;
Abdul,
I see four main issues to deal with:
1) Rewrite all the sentences that use ‘you’ or ‘your’, ‘us’ or ‘we’.
2) You’re missing a third difference. I mean, you have written about tasks and educational requirements, but you need a third one. The idea that regular nurses work with patients in general and pediatric nurses work with children is too obvious, too basic.
3) There are citations and references, but is not in APA the references are not in APA format.
4) There are no strong transitions between paragraphs.
Times New Roman (12-point font) 5/5
Cover page 0/5
Paragraphs & Smooth Transitions 0/5 – I appreciate the fact that you have tried to write sentences that link your paragraphs together.
Quotes/Citations 2/5 – There are citations, but they are not effective since they do not provide specific, detailed information.
Correct use of signal phrases 0/5 – Since there are no quotes, there are no signal phrases, e.g., “According to X (2021), “….”.
Parallelism 5/5
Comparative Forms 5/5
At least 3 references 1/5 – You have three references, but they are not in APA format.
Length: 3-4 pages 1/5 – Too short because there is not enough research and elaboration of each point.
Accurate grammar, spelling, & punctuation
5/5
TOTAL: 24/50 POINTS.
please do not change the main ideas and I dropped my work take a look at it.